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　托福独立写作怎样才能取得高分？要想托福独立写作取得高分，文章需要有一个好的展开。所谓好的展开，要有清晰合理的解释，例子或者细节。比如想要证明分论点“做兼职能够帮学生们减轻家庭的经济负担”，有的同学会写出这样的例子：

　　For example, I used to work part-time in my university, and I was able to make some money each month. Using the money I earned, I could buy the things I wanted without asking my parents for extra money. In this case, my parents did not have to pay for everything and felt less stressful.

　　当然，这个段落基本是围绕主题句去展开的，但这个例子只是对于主题句的简单重复，并没有多少实际的details，所以即便扣题，这个段落在development这方面，也不会拿到高分。

　　我们把这一段改进一下，再来看：

　　For example, I used to work part-time in the dining hall at my university, and I was able to make 800 dollars each month. Using themoney I earned, I was able to buy the Harry Potter series I always wanted toread, have dinner with my friends and go hiking on the weekends without asking my parents for extra money. In this case, my parents did not have to pay for everything and felt less stressful.

　　这个例子把之前一段中许多笼统抽象的词都写得更加具体了。比如，work part-time 改成了work part-time in the dining hall，some money改成了800 dollars each month, 以及buy the things 改成了buy the Harry Potter series I always wanted to read, have dinner with my friends and go hiking on the weekends。

　　可以看到，改过之后的段落具体的细节更多，并且阅读起来也更加真实可信

　　要做到具体有细节，我们写出来的内容就要有画面感。

　　比如，在文章中提到food，就不具体，因为food包含的范围太广，每个人看到food时所想到的东西不一样。如果直接写McDonald’s，考官看到之后，脑海中出现的一定是麦当劳的标志，麦当劳叔叔，或是麦当劳餐盘中的食物，总之都和麦当劳相关。

　　以上就是托福独立写作如何展开的相关内容。

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