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【托福】托福写作中绝对不能出现的四种开头
2018-04-07 07:55
来源:沈阳新东方
作者:小编
下面为同学们带来的内容是4种托福写作开头不可取,这是4种托福写作禁忌同学们要注意。希望同学们通过阅读对托福写作考试有一定的帮助。下面,和小编一起来看看新托福写作中的一些案例吧:
“害死人”托福写作开头之一:过分简单没有重点(喷血指数:☆☆)
典型失败案例:Topic-The importance of environmental protection
This issue is surely very important, let’s talk about it!
“害死人”托福写作开头之二:用词不当 表达不准 (喷血指数:☆☆)
典型失败案例:Topic-Should college students be allowed to get married?
I think college students should not be allowed to get married because they are very young and so we can’t take the responsibility to form a family。
“害死人”托福写作开头之三:意思重复原地踏步(喷血指数:☆☆☆)
典型失败案例:Topic-Your opinion on DINK families
My opinion on DINK families is that DINK families is not a good thing. And it is a bad thing. It brings no benefits to our society and it is even sometimes harmful to our society。
“害死人”托福写作开头之四:中国俗语胡乱翻译(喷血指数:☆☆☆☆☆)
典型失败案例:Topic 1-Is it good to have a large family?
I think it is good to have a large family. Because we Chinese believe a sentence: “Many sons, many lucks”……
正确说法:Happiness lies in having many children
Topic 2 -Should we pretend to know everything or admit our ignorance?
We all know, our Chinese old fathers and grandfathers said: “Know is know, don’t know is don’t know”……
Topic 3- Do you think one’s character is greatly influenced by his/her family?
Chinese old words says very good: Dragon born dragon, phoenix born phoenix, rat’s son can make hole……
以上就是托福写作禁忌,绝对不可出现的托福写作开头的介绍。这些错误大家要十分注意,经常会出现在我们的托福写作中,希望同学们对于这个进行了解。
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