塞纳河边遛弯时发现路边很多的充电桩，节能电车在巴黎得到了极大的推广，仔细观察就会发现这些车是没有排气孔的无污染新能源汽车。在浪漫气息的熏陶下，一下子想到这不就可以变成我们雅思写作的素材了吗!

　　比如：The environmental problem in the world can not be solved by ordinary people, and governments and large companies should be responsible for this problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

　　考试中我们拿到一个雅思写作题目，首先不要着急下笔，担心时间不够。有时候思路清晰，下笔时只是把自己计划好的outline进行语言的补充整理即可。做到思路清晰，不跑题。

　　第一步审题：普通人对环保做不出什么贡献， 政府和企业应承担环保问题的责任，你是否同意这个观点?

　　第二步确定结构： 本文属于agree or disagree 的观点类。所以首先在文章首段的介绍部分，我们要明确点明人们的的纠结点在于谁该为环保负责。People’s opinions differ on whether individual should take the responsibility for the environmental protection. 下面我们最重要的是亮明自己的观点!!!本文的观点是，个人也要参与环保事业中去。I strongly express my conviction that the environmental issue is certainly relevant to each individual citizen.

　　第三步确定文章主体：这当然也是我们雅思写作最重中之重的一部分啦。 评分标准第一项 TASK ACHIEVEMENT 明确表明，我们的文章要思想统一，一致。虽然说起来简单，也是我们考生大部分欠缺的。拿题就下笔，导致我们的思路常常中断，有时为了凑字数，随便再加几笔，套用一些所谓高大上的模板句。这时候一篇看起来文笔优美的“四不像”低分作文就诞生了。主体段落中我们更应该注意评分标准的第二项COHERENCE & COHESION， 文章的逻辑至关重要。 我们写的每一句话，每一条思路要有始有终。因果，转折，举例子详细说明都要含括，当然，这不是我瞎说的哦，评分标准明确指出每一个topic sentence后要加上fully supporting sentences and examples.

　　我们就拿今天这篇文章来试试手吧~~

　　A： 反驳The environmental problem in the world can not be solved by ordinary people。

　　首先我们承认个人在环保领域发挥的作用很微小，但是不可忽略。这就是让步句，承认部分事实，但是自己想表达的观点更为重要。常见句型的使用：although XXXXX， XXXXX 或者 It is true that XXXXX, however, XXXXX. 宝宝们，发现重点落在哪部分了吗?

　　我们来感受一下： It is true that citizen can do little help to climate change, however measures cannot be done all by government and major companies alone. Co-operation and participation deriving from individual citizens have indispensable roles to play in safeguarding the natural environment. (本句为中心思想)。People can purchase cleaner cars with zero emission which is environmental friendly. For example, in some European countries, they prefer “ green car” mainly for two reasons. One is this kind of car usually equipped with a small size which is easy for charging and parking on the street. Another one is no exhaust gas, it consumes solar energy and electrcity rather than fuel. As a result, even though there is an increasing number of cars running on the roads, however, the air is fresh and clear.

　　下面是自己的练习时间。 同学们试着拿起笔，我们一起完成政府如何做改善环境的这个雅思题目。

　　首先中心思想是什么：

　　补充说明句：

　　举例子要和补充说明句相关联，做到思路一致。

　　帮大家想出一个观点，自己试着进行脑洞风暴并且完成吧! Government could invest more money on public transport。

　　同学们，作为学霸的你，出去玩也不要忘记学习呀，祝你早日和雅思分手!