My Dream

　　我的梦想

　　Everyone has a lot of dreams. Some people want to be rich, dreaming of becoming millionairesovernight. Others want to be famous, dreaming of suddenly jumping to great fame. I have alot of dreams, too. When I was a young girl, I dreamed of becoming a scientist like Hua Luogenin future. However, I knew ve ry well that I could not succeed without painstaking efforts. So Istudied hard in the middle school and college in order to attain my goal.

　　After graduating from college, I found a job as a teacher. Although I was very busy withteaching, I never gave up my goal. I read a lot of books to get more knowledge. I madeexperiments to pr actise and apply what I had learnt from the books. Sometimes, I was sodeeply indulged in my research that I forgot my meals and time. Now I have made greatprogress. Several of my research papers have been published. The methods proposed in mypapers have been proven to be valuable for the solution of some problems. I am very happy. The ladder of becoming a scientist is still far ahead, but I have climbed the first rung anyway.

　　六级作文结构分析：

　　Everybody has a lot of dreams

　　Some people’s dr eams

　　Other people’s dreams

　　My dream

　　How I realize my dream

　　Study hard

　　Work hard

　　Achievements so far made

　　long way to go

　　六级作文内容分析：

　　本文为一篇记叙文。文中第一段为夹叙夹议, 以general comment 开头, 引出“我的梦想”。第二段为作者为实现梦想所做的努力和取得的成果, 最后一句“成为科学家的阶梯还遥遥在上, 但我至少已攀登了第一级。”既是总结又是方向。此句摹仿了Jack London 的散文“What Life Mean s to Me”中的一句精彩句子。

　　六级作文万能句型：

　　dream of 梦想……

　　jump to great fame 一举成名

　　be indulged in . . . 沉缅于

　　propose v . 提出

　　ladde r n . 梯子

　　rung n . (梯子的)级