Should Retirement Age Be Postponed?

　　1. 近年来，推迟退休年龄引发人们热议

　　2. 推迟退休年龄有利也有弊

　　3. 我的看法

　　范文：

　　Based on a recent survey on the Internet, amajority of individuals admit that aging society willbring a variety of problems to their life. Along withthe trend of longevity, it has become a trend forpeople to debate whether it is wise to postponeretirement age.

　　Some people favor postponing the retirementage. In their eyes, it is this policy that enables the aging society to build up enough work-force. As a matter of fact, people in mounting numbers have come to realize this problem in an agingsociety. Even so, others hold a different view that postponing retirement age carries some risks. This policy can bring old people stress, but cannot arouse their enthusiasm for work, andcannot help them to enjoy their retirement pension.

　　I am convinced that we should balance old people’ interest and this aging society. Thus, ifthose seniors have enthusiasm for work, we should educate, advocate and encourage themto work and perform their tasks. If we try our utmost to do so, the future of old people’ life willbe promising, hopeful and rosy.